tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2587297813443360067.post8650118770032098177..comments2024-03-17T22:24:28.885-07:00Comments on Keary Taylor: Eden SnippetKeary Taylorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05077979919279588225noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2587297813443360067.post-6626651016313248632011-01-23T15:09:12.973-08:002011-01-23T15:09:12.973-08:00I really dig the scene. It's believable.
My t...I really dig the scene. It's believable.<br /><br />My two small pieces of constructive criticism:<br /><br />1. Don't be afraid to use the word "said". Really, it's okay!<br /><br />2. There's a whole lot of whispering going on for such a small snippet<br /><br />I'm checking in on this blog pretty regularly now. Keep sharing, and let us all know when you need some read throughs!Brad Jaegerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12672047492091058737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2587297813443360067.post-68728344362171970222011-01-14T10:17:29.440-08:002011-01-14T10:17:29.440-08:00Thanks for the compliments everyone! Crystal- tha...Thanks for the compliments everyone! Crystal- that will get explained as the book goes on ;) I'll try and post a few more pieces in the next little while!Keary Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077979919279588225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2587297813443360067.post-39076615020068371152011-01-12T13:32:31.330-08:002011-01-12T13:32:31.330-08:00I agree with your previous comments. There is a ve...I agree with your previous comments. There is a very human element to your characters, Eve especially. Your descriptions of things are very tangible, like you could reach out and touch them. I also like the 'it's creepy' joke in the middle. I love sardonic humor to lighten the moods of the more serious situations. Great work.Steve Barringtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18387109917720536656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2587297813443360067.post-78117858505786276922011-01-11T18:13:57.891-08:002011-01-11T18:13:57.891-08:00Beautiful exert Keary :) and I love the two 's...Beautiful exert Keary :) and I love the two 'stamps' they look familiar *grin*<br /><br />The Arrival, on Amazon NOW!<br />www.damselinadirtydress.comNicolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17648307410383451558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2587297813443360067.post-57163365114181213992011-01-11T11:00:27.215-08:002011-01-11T11:00:27.215-08:00AAah, it's so exciting! Having read what you h...AAah, it's so exciting! Having read what you had on your site before this is really leaving me on the edge of my seat. <br />So, I went to click on Team Avian, and I thought it was gonna take me to a fan site for him or something! I was so disappointed when it didn't ;)<br />The characters are great, the storyline is awesome, I can't wait to see what will happen with the fallen!<br />The only thing I was confused about was that their garden seems to be in an open space, without much cover, then how is it the helicopters haven't seen it? Just something I was thinking about.~Crystal~https://www.blogger.com/profile/15411390731113312416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2587297813443360067.post-63865091855483071972011-01-11T09:45:01.997-08:002011-01-11T09:45:01.997-08:00LOVE IT! I agree with Melissa! Love the way you ma...LOVE IT! I agree with Melissa! Love the way you make your characters so real. Can't wait to read this masterpiece. Seriously can't wait!Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02966311175965305713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2587297813443360067.post-28606201955239757552011-01-11T07:17:54.095-08:002011-01-11T07:17:54.095-08:00I just love the vulnerability of your characters, ...I just love the vulnerability of your characters, Keary! It makes them so tangible! I can't wait to read EDEN. It sounds brilliant! :)<br /><br />I'm in the process of editing my book, RACE, and there's a teaser on my site, too, if you want to check it out!Melissa (i swim for oceans)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06840790603713851746noreply@blogger.com